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Much of the book grew out of a seminar I teach at the law school of Santa Clara University. Each Thursday we discuss a technology that I am willing to argue, at least for a week, will revolutionize the world. On Sunday students email me legal issues that revolution will raise, to be put on the class web page for other students to read. Tuesday we discuss the issues and how to deal with them. Next Thursday a new technology and a new revolution. Nanotech has just turned the world into gray goo; it must be March.

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[Sun Sep 26 18:07:01 EDT 2004-269] Scott (NOSPAMsds49@law.georgetown.edu.NOSPAM):
If it's the style you're going for, it's perfectly acceptable, but if not: "Next Thursday..." is a fragment. One might link it to the previous statement with a comma, if aesthetically so inclined.

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